Tanka and Metrical Revisions

Poem 1.
i love you so much
more than you will ever know,
three words, eight letters
i never want you to leave
and i will never leave you

Poem 2.
i love you so much more than you will
ever know, three words, eight letters, i
never want you to leave and i will
never ever leave you i love you

Poem 3.
you are the greatest thing i have
ever known, i could never love
another, and i never will, i
can promise you that i love you

Poem 4.

Elegy

my dear you were the greatest of them all!
you knew the most
you loved the most
and you expected the least
you taught me everything i know
you gave me everything i have

dont fear, i will be with you soon
only time will tell
my heart will break
and so will i

i still can't believe youre gone
nothing will ever be the same
no one will ever give what you gave me
no one will ever teach what you taught me
and no one will ever love the way you loved me
i will never love another

Trochaic and Anaseptic